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Vincent would be in the middle of the forest training with his manifested
zanpakutos, as the 3 would fight hand to hand and sword to sword, all
people could hear was flash and collissions for those who where close to
the forest area, as the battle was instense... hokama would be exerting
himself not having seen his wife in a few week buts earlier today as
this would saden hokama deeply making his virus go off on him in first
stage. as he would grip his chest in pain.... starting to cough a bit. "
..."

A senkaimon would open after vincent seemed to continue
fighting trying to hide the fact he was stressed that his wife was away
for so long, as he cared deeply for her that no seeing for a while would
make his mind run... as it would be so bad that it would kick start the
virus into its second stage where vincent would feel weak as his chest
would start to hurt and he felt he would fall towards the ground
coughing out blood as a senkaimon would open his wife apearing out of it
as she would see the bloody vincent in the ground fallen being taken
cared by two misterious ninja while she arrive ready to attack the ninja
as the blind one with a mask similiar to vicent would say, " Don't try
it.. princess... i am Pyromethius and this is solaris and we are part of
vincent and its about time you got here hes been worried about you all
this time that he became sick.... Lebirrah would rush vincent into his rrom
as she would put a went cold blanket on his forehead to coll his body
down as she would go and find those vile vincent would take to stablise
his virus as he would hold his hands with tears falling from her eyes
saying, " Vince... i wish you wouldnt get like this.... i dont want to
lose you... you children need you.... I need you... you can be a pain at
times but i just want you to feel better and be safe..." - she would
place her face into his chest crying her head of for the only man she
loved.-

Lebirrah would sigh wishing there was something she could but
she knew she couldn't, her husband was more important then some work at
the soul society as she could here something beeping by Vincent left
wrist as it would be an alarm showing where the hollow had apeared and
where it was attacking as she would press the button the alarm would
silence as she would say, " You never stop working to keep us all safe
and no one sees that, cause lets face it your hard on people.... but i
can understand... i was the only person you actually opened and even you
where scared to... -tears run down her eyes.- Im sorry that you lost
your vision because of me, i wish you could see me... and how much the
kids have grown.. i know you must miss that alot... you may think i cant
notice but i do.... if i was strong enough to have not been taken
away... youd be able to see... V_v... Viny... im sorry.... I know you
wish to help out in the house and and do normal things... im sorry v_v -
more tears fall towards the ground.

while she said this the
unconcious Viny would have tears coming out his eyes as he layed there
being able to hear her. she would add on saying as she cried, " Ive....
never seen a man..cry... till one day i saw you crying... when you
first met ember.... wishing you didnt have missed her child hood.... the
day... she was born.... i could see the sadness in your face of not
being able to see your own child... and yet through it all ive seen you
get up from all this.... and fight... for your family for what you
believe.... even when you virus kicked in and you couldnt take the
pain.... you faught to stand... and keep fighting to protect this world
not just for others but for us... your family... - says this as she
would rub his face with her soft gentle hands...- You make me feel... so
wanted and beautiful.... even if you can't see me.... you see me as
angel... which i know im not but you make feel as if i was.... idc what
anyone says... Vince... even blind.... youve been the best father.... a
man could be.... im sorry that the soul.... experimented... on
you like a lab rat.... even from that you stood up and accepted it and
went to help those other who like you had become... soko heishi... you
may see... your self...useless.... but you always seem to help others
before yourself always... who knew a blind man could do more then what a
regular man can do.... - holds his hand tightly. not letting go one
bit.-

- suddenly she could feel vincents, hands shaking struggling
as he would try to speak though the words sounded retarted... vincent
would say, "
I-ll.........neeveer.......stoop.....looving......uee......an.....geell..."
Tier eyes would widen as she would say, " Vincent... please....
please.... just rest.... please.... dont make
your....self....suffer....anymore and just rest....." Lebirrah would cry
even more... as the man... would try so hard.... as he choke on some
blood to... speak to her.... even if it killed him as his hand would
fall from her hand... as he can totaly out cold.-

tell me you felt after reading this?
Just a sad story that came to mind, that really touched me to write a while ago.

tell me what you think
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:iconthelegendarysix:
Thelegendarysix Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Tis sad :(
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HollowFactor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah very sad
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:iconthelegendarysix:
Thelegendarysix Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
that it be
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:iconhollowfactor:
HollowFactor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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:iconthelegendarysix:
Thelegendarysix Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
^^
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NakamuraXAkira Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A very interesting and heart felt piece. I cant say I was extremely sad but, I felt moved. Well done.
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HollowFactor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ty very much ^^ same
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Jade-Queen-Of-Souls Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Very so cute indeed, wish there was a cure for the guy, that does get in the way alot i noticed, but good thing babygirl Tia is there to hold him, all that counts. :)
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HollowFactor Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ITs not tia anymore, figured id let her be xenethis and make a new oc that only vincent can have, named her Lebirrah Ait
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Jade-Queen-Of-Souls Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, any pics of her? :o
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